By C. Edward Baldwin
My rating: 2.5 of 5 stars

( I received this book free from the Author in exchange for my honest review )

2.5 Stars

This book started out good, it peaked my interest and the mystery was alluring, but it fell hard. The writing was repetitive and to be honest noting of important happens until the last 30% of the book, and it just kind of, happens.

I felt that I was being told the story instead of getting absorb into it. I had to keep putting the book down because I was just not feeling it. The world building was, factual and two dimensional. It was like reading an assessment report, no pop, no ump.

I wasn't a fan of Kallie, things were just was too easy for her, and in all she was border line Mary-sue. And that first damn line, what do normal collage girls think about, boys. I was in collage, sure boys where somewhere in the long list of worries, like how I was going to pay for food/booze. But not a constant thought. That turned me off from her, and ruin it for me for the rest of the book.

The premises for this story is quite intriguing, and original. There was lots of potential and still is. I believe this story can be a easy 10 with a little more work and clear up.

Through I did not like this read, I do recommend it. As I said the plot is original and quite unusual, with a mystery that will keep you guessing.

I would like to thank C. Edward Baldwin for letting my experience his work.

Happy Reading


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